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I get an awkward handshake
a hug that was a minute too late
i get cheap beer for my heart to mend
when all i needed
when all i needed was a friend

I get a sympathetic smile
on the ground concentrated eye
I get no one to wipe the tears that i shed
when all i needed
when all i needed was a friend

I get strangers calling themselves another name
Everything's changing while i stay the same
I get a lie that says "i understand"
when all i needed
when all i needed was a friend
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TeaPhotography Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Professional General Artist
Wow, this is very good. Great expression of a truth.
Also the repetitive format is really excellent in this case because it, gives it more power or *empowers* it perfectly.
Well done! :clap:
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lenalamf Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much love! Hug 
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RogueMudblood Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014   Writer
This reads very much like a song. I can definitely see someone singing this piece, and I think you've expressed this sentiment very well.
Viewing your art through LiterallyUnknown.
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lenalamf Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah it kinda does; thanks :)
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